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Ok guys! I took everyones feedback and tried to fuse all the best qualities from the concept sheet into one supreme demonic abomination. Here's a rough for an Abomination General...This is a commander of lower abominations and demons against the humans and mechs in the Dominance War. I want him to be a "boss" character who can destroy any foe, commanding respect despite his abominable status. He is a fusion of demons... His arm is a demon/dragon head with a hunger for blood and destruction. His Mount is a demon beast stitched to the torso of a fallen demon lord reanimated with Necromancy...he is undead and will attack until every last piece of him is defeated. Let me know what you guys think....still rough!

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~cobaltglitch Apr 23, 2009, 4:12:45 PM
ok im not gonna write a long critique and its gonna be simple minded. ok so its 3 things; demonic and wicked(i count wicked twice). and the way it looks old worldly just makes it look better its very detailed too. thats pretty much all i got so im just gonna type random stuf seems how i still got 41 words now 38 37 hjd h hh h h hh h h h h h hh h hh h h h h hh h h h hh h h hh h h h hh h hh h h hh h
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=Andantonius Apr 23, 2009, 7:43:57 AM
That looks excellent! I love all the little details, and the rendering is great! The skull necklace gives the whole thing a fantastic sense of scale as well. Very original design, too; the head in the chest gives it a really monstrous look.

The only thing that I can see wrong with it (And not even wrong, just could-be-better), is the overall rendering is very uniform. It's all sort of the same 10%-50% value range across the entire thing, so the eye doesn't really know where to start or stop and kinda gets lost in all the yummy details. I'd suggest making different parts have different value ranges and perhaps making a more definitive light source.

But, overall, wonderful concept and great execution! :D
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*RaptorArts Apr 22, 2009, 11:49:30 PM
WOW now thats Wicked! O..O

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~Jetdeagon Apr 22, 2009, 11:52:57 PM
That's amazing.
I would play the game just to see how this turns out if it ends up being in there haha

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Why?

Why? What are you, an imbecile? Isn't it obvious? That way, when I bottle you up, I'll be able to properly label you.."
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~Raja-Ulat Apr 22, 2009, 11:57:10 PM
That guy can fit in Warhammer fantasy, world of warcraft and diablo as a lvl80-100 boss quite nicely... ^^;

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I am a dreamy Fool trying to find my place in the world...
I am a twisted Monster dreaming for happiness in this world...
So please judge me fairly as I bring forth my dreams to reality...
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=Solomen Apr 22, 2009, 11:57:31 PM
Now if he was a midboss I'd hate to see the final boss :D (unless somebody else was playing ^^; )
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~TwilightRaven Apr 23, 2009, 12:05:37 AM
The only thing I can think to say about this thing is its terror and death incrate!

Can't imagine what else you could do with it.
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~Stadno Apr 23, 2009, 12:07:56 AM
i like it, looks pretty damn ftiggin cool for a boos! good job on it ay

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~RatButcher Apr 23, 2009, 12:11:37 AM
I would shit my pants if I saw that...
But I do not think the "logo" looks all that demonic. it needs to look sloppier ans simpler, unless he stoll it. And I think instead of armor and blades on the legs, you should make it armored skin, like scales/plates or something, and for the blades, make em like bony spikes, kind of like ribs or something.

That is my opinion! XD
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Mood: Love ~RatButcher Apr 23, 2009, 12:12:53 AM
oh, and I forgot to say, I think it is REALLY friggin intense!
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~ithos Apr 23, 2009, 12:27:15 AM
Too long spikes on the legs might pull focus from the mighty moose helm. Editing this would perhaps also let the long spikes on the left arm (seen on right) become more balanced with giant right arm of death....
Bottom half could perhaps be ever so slightly larger, to add mass.

Otherwise awesome, and you've probably put more thought into this than I can do by first glance :P. Consider or ignore my suggestions as much as you like. This is still damn good concept art.
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