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So, to summarise what I wrote before: great poses. Really dynamic. Horse good. Knight's body too short and stiff, try leaning him to give him more sense of movement. Good work on face. Like the feet.
Hope that makes sense... I can't be arsed to rewrite it all right now
The poses in this are very dynamic. You can see the troll grabbing the lance and using the momentum to swing round with its club, the frightend horse trying to get away. I would say the rider looks to calm; to say he's about to be splatted, he appears to be sitting quite calmly. His upper body is quite squat, too, and slightly disproportionate to his legs. Perhaps if you have him leaning forward more, or in any direction apart from up, it might look more lifelike for the knight.
The troll's ace, though. The face is spot on, and I think you've done the feet well - they look very firmly planted in the ground.